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lirazel ([personal profile] lirazel) wrote2020-05-10 05:26 pm
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Just tried to read a romance novel whose characters and plot I was intrigued by but whose prose made me want to bash my head in.

Most romance novel prose that bothers me is irritating because it's too casual, it's too...contemporary. This book, however, had the opposite problem: the writer never, ever used a simple word when an obscure, multi-syllabic, or archaic one could be forced into the sentence. It was incredibly frustrating because other than that, I think the writer was very good! But when every single sentence feels forced like that, I just can't keep reading!

The prose was the epitome of trying too hard. Did the people of the Regency era use more complicated syntax and a different vocabulary than we did? Of course they did! But when I read actual Regency prose written by actual Regency writers, it is easier and more enjoyable to read than this writer's slavish attempts to emulate it! And her editor should be fired for not saving her from this trap!

As is typical when I read a book I dislike, I scrolled through the Goodreads reviews looking for people who agree with me. Unfortunately, no one seems to! The book was very highly rated and no one complained about the prose!

Maybe I am too picky? And maybe I should just read Georgette Heyer instead of trying to find good recently-written romance novels?
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[personal profile] elisi 2020-05-11 03:42 pm (UTC)(link)
JKR has been so ridiculous that I established a rule for myself: if it's not stated in the canonical work(s) themselves, it's not canon and I can embrace or ignore it as I desire.
Ah yes, I absolutely get that. I think it depends on the fandom in that case. Good Omens - ANYTHING the creators says is welcome because I trust them. Joss Whedon... What's on screen, nothing else. Doctor Who... Doctor Who basically doesn't have a canon, so anything goes:

https://mirrorleaf.tumblr.com/post/160127912952/common-answers-to-seemingly-simple-questions-asked

:)

13-year-old!Lauren was very impressionable, so to this day I am averse to What Is Canon debates. I have my own ideas, but I don't care what other people think.
You should love my link above! The thing about Doctor Who is that no one 'owns' it. There have been so many showrunners and writers that there is no one person who can say what is and isn't canon.

Do you love the book lots? Or are you more just a fan of the show? I can't remember.
I fell in love with the show and then bought the book (and the script book). Am very very fond of the book, but prefer TV canon.
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[personal profile] elisi 2020-05-12 06:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Right???? Talk about another person who needs to be quiet! The stuff he said about what was going to happen on Firefly made me glad it got canceled!
My Joss tag has been 'ex-member of the church of joss' for QUITE some years. >:(

I did love that post and related to it a lot as both a Star Wars and a Star Trek fan!
Wonderful, isn't it? This is also v useful.

I read the book once and wasn't crazy about it--I enjoyed the show a lot more--but I wonder if I'd like it more if I reread it now.
It's fab for getting more background. But it doesn't have the emotional impact (or the depth) of the show. Which makes sense since the focus is different - the book is about balance, whereas the show is about being true to yourself and leaving damaging structures behind. <3 (I have many links that I can throw at you!)