I would have had the text deal more explicitly with Katniss's feelings re: Peeta and the line between pretend and reality. I would have had Peeta taken and brainwashed in the second book so we could actually DEAL WITH THIS in the third and see why these two would fall in love. Also, I would not have had Katniss have kids.
The Quarter Quell didn't really need to happen? Book 2, other than introducing great new characters--I love Finnick! I love you Johanna!-- was kind of worthless to the overall plot? Like, I would have expanded the war into two books instead of trying to fit it in one. (I always want a war narrative. I am predictible.)
FIX THE PACING IN THE LAST BOOK.
CINNA AND FINNICK MY BABIES DON'T LEAVE ME. I don't know if I could have killed them off, seeing how much I love them.
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I would have had the text deal more explicitly with Katniss's feelings re: Peeta and the line between pretend and reality. I would have had Peeta taken and brainwashed in the second book so we could actually DEAL WITH THIS in the third and see why these two would fall in love. Also, I would not have had Katniss have kids.
The Quarter Quell didn't really need to happen? Book 2, other than introducing great new characters--I love Finnick! I love you Johanna!-- was kind of worthless to the overall plot? Like, I would have expanded the war into two books instead of trying to fit it in one. (I always want a war narrative. I am predictible.)
FIX THE PACING IN THE LAST BOOK.
CINNA AND FINNICK MY BABIES DON'T LEAVE ME. I don't know if I could have killed them off, seeing how much I love them.
Those are just the first ones that come to mind.