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lirazel ([personal profile] lirazel) wrote2011-08-16 10:42 am

keep me awake at work today, y'all!

If I made Cinderella, the audience would immediately be looking for a body in the coach. —Alfred Hitchcock

When I write a story, what do readers immediately look for?
next_to_normal: (Casey laughing)

[personal profile] next_to_normal 2011-08-16 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Parentheses! Haha, I know other people use that writing style, but I always associate it with you.

[identity profile] slaymesoftly.livejournal.com 2011-08-16 08:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Good writing and possibly (probably) some major angst or darkness?
ETA - bearing in mind that most of what I've read has been set in the world of BtVS/AtS. I see that I could branch out considerably... I've read a few of your crossovers, but I didn't realize how much else you had that I might want to dip into.
Edited 2011-08-16 20:39 (UTC)

[identity profile] bluemage55.livejournal.com 2011-08-16 09:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Spot-on character voices, deep explorations of subtextual motivation, and Dawn being adorable. :)

[identity profile] maddie2927.livejournal.com 2011-08-16 11:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome, awesome parentheticals. Also, kleenex. I look for kleenex. in my house. because your prose makes me cry. Also, I hate you a little for writing Dawn/The Immortal because I liked it so much that I wanted more, and you know who else writes Dawn/The Immortal? Oh, that's right, no one.

Wait, what was the question?

haha ;)

[identity profile] worldwasasong.livejournal.com 2011-08-17 12:00 am (UTC)(link)
My first thought was "Buffy. Spike." And then I giggled to myself. Other than that, I agree with eowyn's parentheses vote. Also, hahaha at maddie's comment about Dawn and The Immortal, because -- my thoughts exactly!!! Mooooooore. ...Ahem, No pressure.

Also when I think of your writing I think "very good."

Yeah, sorry this is not that coherent. I'm post-long-work-day.

[identity profile] ghostyouknow27.livejournal.com 2011-08-17 01:46 am (UTC)(link)
I agree with the parenthesis and spot-on voices!

(Also, I somehow missed that you did crossovers, since I think I've only caught your stuff at Seasonal Spuffy? Excuse me while I Instapaper your entire LJ for lunchtime reading).