Isn’t there supposed to be some sort of demon cult? Wanting to exterminate all life? The prophecy said that, but I hadn't heard of them. Something about Daleks?"

The dread Dalek demons! Hee! I do love Andrew.

You write Dawn beautifully here. She's very believable, and completely compelling. I've always love Dawn but this is making me want more of her story! The Dawn/ Immortal hints are really fun too.