Oh, bloody fantastic. There aren't nearly enough V/S fics out there, but this one is glorious and very well written. The narration is smooth and haunting, and there are so many lines I love. I'll quote my favorite:

“I wish I could paint them,” Priya says, and his idea of happiness becomes a world in which Priya can paint again.

Yes, wonderful.

I also love how you neatly sidestepped the issue of not knowing Victor's real name. The main reason I can't write an Epitaph One V/S fic is because I need to know his name, but here the omission isn't noticeable unless you're specifically looking for it.