You mention that's a change for you stylistically, but I think the style works beautifully - it's elegant without drawing too much attention to itself, which fits this story. *sigh of relief* Oh, good! I don't often write things with huge amounts of dialogue--and this is very dialogue-driven--and, like I mentioned, I rarely do multi-chapter stuff, so I'm very, very glad to know that you think the style works.
Oh, Buffy. Oh, Spike. Ouch ouch. Yeah. They sure can hurt each other, can't they?
Thank you so much for reviewing! I really hope you continue to enjoy the story!
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You mention that's a change for you stylistically, but I think the style works beautifully - it's elegant without drawing too much attention to itself, which fits this story. *sigh of relief* Oh, good! I don't often write things with huge amounts of dialogue--and this is very dialogue-driven--and, like I mentioned, I rarely do multi-chapter stuff, so I'm very, very glad to know that you think the style works.
Oh, Buffy. Oh, Spike. Ouch ouch. Yeah. They sure can hurt each other, can't they?
Thank you so much for reviewing! I really hope you continue to enjoy the story!