If I had a choice, this would totally come first. Because the Aeneid? Sucks so hard. And this most definitely does not.
I'll definitely give the prompt more of a work through. My problem with original fiction, is sustaining it. My ideas themselves are novel length but I can't make the writing last that long. I have an issue with being overly concise.
DEAN/PIE = OTP FOR SURE. Even Kripke agrees with us. Pie would never abandon Dean. And Dean would never abandon pie. Therefore OTP.
Ah, it's our twinnish powers at work again Lauren.
Dean is one of those people who loves a few people all-consumingly. I think if his life ever allowed for it, he could love a woman with that kind of love, too That is exactly it. He has so much to give but the circumstances of his life, of his history, of his family demand otherwise.
the tragedy that is what could have never been once again, EXACTLY.
I honestly thought you wrote the action really well. I struggle with that, I'm far better at small conversations or internalising stuff; action is a problem. I like that you gave us the details but made it very clear that while that's important, what's really important is Dean and Lyla and whether he can save her.
Re: Lyla's section.
I'll definitely give the prompt more of a work through. My problem with original fiction, is sustaining it. My ideas themselves are novel length but I can't make the writing last that long. I have an issue with being overly concise.
DEAN/PIE = OTP FOR SURE. Even Kripke agrees with us. Pie would never abandon Dean. And Dean would never abandon pie. Therefore OTP.
Ah, it's our twinnish powers at work again Lauren.
Dean is one of those people who loves a few people all-consumingly. I think if his life ever allowed for it, he could love a woman with that kind of love, too
That is exactly it. He has so much to give but the circumstances of his life, of his history, of his family demand otherwise.
the tragedy that is what could have never been
once again, EXACTLY.
I honestly thought you wrote the action really well. I struggle with that, I'm far better at small conversations or internalising stuff; action is a problem. I like that you gave us the details but made it very clear that while that's important, what's really important is Dean and Lyla and whether he can save her.