ext_150328 ([identity profile] ava-leigh-fitz.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lirazel 2009-01-10 11:27 pm (UTC)

THIS IS SO SO GOOD LAUREN. SERIOUSLY.

You've got the sisters spot on, Amy especially and your Laurie. Oh man, you've got Laurie down pat. And I know May's said it but your use of the strikeouts is so so well done. Like, seriously. I never would've thought to use those but it really highlights the differences between his relationships with Amy and Jo.

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