ext_37503 ([identity profile] vanessagalore.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lirazel 2008-06-17 07:25 am (UTC)

Really great characterizations of all of the characters. I especially liked Eli's, but each section had some new viewpoint that I hadn't really considered before – a new take on a familiar character – and that should be the goal of this kind of writing, in my opinion.

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