Wow, you really pinned all the characters down. Duncan is especially well done, partly because he's so difficult and partly because, well, I'm biased and I love him (or at least the idea of him as he could've been if the writers had capitalized on his potential as a character). My other favorite is the end of Logan's section, the idea that he might as well deserve the punishment -- that's exactly how I think he'd feel. You really got Eli down well too, his mixture of qualities--ruthless enough to describe Lilly as a slut and a bitch, pulling no punches, while at the same time not able to kill. I'm not as big a fan of the Casablancas brothers, as a rule, but you made me sympathize with both of them a lot more than I usually do. The part about Cassidy crying under the bed was especialyl heartbreaking. What a beautiful, well-written fic; thanks for sharing.