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So here goes:
Logan: Oh. My. God. I love how you write Logan. It's so ... unique and artistic and so ... classical in the way that he's a tormented soul, but hides it underneath ... god knows what because .. that's-that's what Logan is isn't it? And you captured his personality beautifully.
I especially loved this line: (nobody can love with the ferocity of twelve years old, unless it’s eighteen when the whole world is epic). Rose a chuckle out of me, which is good or I'd been all depressed when I wrote this. *nods*
Cassidy: I almost cried. I almost just broke down and cried. At first, when you said he died, and then that continuous mention of Beaver. I kept thinking of Beaver and how everyone knows he died in Vienam, and made a scary conclusion at the end. I shook having something so hardened and so numb die. *shudders*
Dick: Okay that ... that had me crying. Had me crying like a fucking baby. It's like a sick pain that there is some responibility hidden in the fact that your brother is dead, even if he was sick adn twisted. It's so cruely objective, and just heartbreaking. I had a line that I liked, but can't recall cause I started crying. And you knwo how it is when you start crying you sometimes forget the reason for it, and I did. *sighs* Damn that line
Eli: What a bitter and cruel objection you have there. To be so crumbled down by this overused "clice" of a badass is so ... utterly ... defying. And yet at the same time it'll break your heart. The jumps from avengment for his mum to Lily was a little more sublte then I thought it would be, because it flowed with the angst, not against it,a nd it was a lovely expression.
Duncan: How can so short and blunt of a description have me feeling completely haunted? It's like that with a mass majority of people who assume you have a perfect life, that in fact no one actually does. And it's a slap across the face, but sucha wonderful description.
Beautiful. All of it. I haven't seen much fo Veronica Mars, but from my view, you nailed the cahracters down with a hammer, and have kept them there. *sighs* Love-a-ly.
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I'll break it down into categories cause if I don't, it'll all sound like this:
dkajflskdjflaksdjflaksdjfioewahjtriasjdfklsadjfioaewfi
So here goes:
Logan:
Oh. My. God. I love how you write Logan. It's so ... unique and artistic and so ... classical in the way that he's a tormented soul, but hides it underneath ... god knows what because .. that's-that's what Logan is isn't it? And you captured his personality beautifully.
I especially loved this line:
Rose a chuckle out of me, which is good or I'd been all depressed when I wrote this. *nods*
Cassidy:
I almost cried. I almost just broke down and cried. At first, when you said he died, and then that continuous mention of Beaver. I kept thinking of Beaver and how everyone knows he died in Vienam, and made a scary conclusion at the end. I shook having something so hardened and so numb die. *shudders*
Dick:
Okay that ... that had me crying. Had me crying like a fucking baby. It's like a sick pain that there is some responibility hidden in the fact that your brother is dead, even if he was sick adn twisted. It's so cruely objective, and just heartbreaking. I had a line that I liked, but can't recall cause I started crying. And you knwo how it is when you start crying you sometimes forget the reason for it, and I did. *sighs* Damn that line
Eli:
What a bitter and cruel objection you have there. To be so crumbled down by this overused "clice" of a badass is so ... utterly ... defying. And yet at the same time it'll break your heart. The jumps from avengment for his mum to Lily was a little more sublte then I thought it would be, because it flowed with the angst, not against it,a nd it was a lovely expression.
Duncan:
How can so short and blunt of a description have me feeling completely haunted? It's like that with a mass majority of people who assume you have a perfect life, that in fact no one actually does. And it's a slap across the face, but sucha wonderful description.
Beautiful. All of it. I haven't seen much fo Veronica Mars, but from my view, you nailed the cahracters down with a hammer, and have kept them there. *sighs* Love-a-ly.