Seriously? That happens to me often when I review, so feel not ashamed.
This is called abysmal lack of self-restraint. There is just no half-way point for me--I either write a sentence or an epic :P I am so with you there. It's why I'm addicted to choco_cherries, because it makes me be concise when I never am under any other circumstances.
lmao. Tim. Of course he did. *snerk* And the follow up, the delivery is perfect Tyra. I have to admit that I'm kind of proud of that bit.
Another line I love--and btw, makes me absolutely green with envy, because you write things I couldn't if I sat down and rewrote my prose for days--because it takes both Tyra's fear and her strength, and fit them together in a way that is so very true to the character. *blushes profusely* That really does mean a lot, coming from you, since you often write sentences that hit me like a punch in the gut.
And yeah, I could just picture Angela watching Oprah and Tyra doing her homework or making dinner or something and rolling her eyes, but listening anyways.
I do think there was more there than we saw, and that it wasn't a battering-type of situation or possibility. Okay, I obviously didn't communicate what I wanted to. I don't think that Tim would have hit her, not ever. I really don't. I just think that, as you say, they were bad for each other, and that her staying with him when she was aware of that (because if Tyra is anything, it's self-aware) was the beginning of something that could lead to her being in a situation she otherwise wouldn't allow herself to be in (the battering part). It's a slippery slope, is what I'm getting at. *hopes that's clearer*
lol. I mean, it isn't funny, but somehow it just *is*, and LOL. The mental image alone is ftw. Glad you laughed!
Thanks so much. Really, I'm so glad that you liked it, especially because I admire your writing so much. Thanks for the lovely, juicy review, too!
Re: long review, pt. 2 (aka. I need to learn how to shut up)
This is called abysmal lack of self-restraint. There is just no half-way point for me--I either write a sentence or an epic :P I am so with you there. It's why I'm addicted to choco_cherries, because it makes me be concise when I never am under any other circumstances.
lmao. Tim. Of course he did. *snerk* And the follow up, the delivery is perfect Tyra. I have to admit that I'm kind of proud of that bit.
Another line I love--and btw, makes me absolutely green with envy, because you write things I couldn't if I sat down and rewrote my prose for days--because it takes both Tyra's fear and her strength, and fit them together in a way that is so very true to the character. *blushes profusely* That really does mean a lot, coming from you, since you often write sentences that hit me like a punch in the gut.
And yeah, I could just picture Angela watching Oprah and Tyra doing her homework or making dinner or something and rolling her eyes, but listening anyways.
I do think there was more there than we saw, and that it wasn't a battering-type of situation or possibility. Okay, I obviously didn't communicate what I wanted to. I don't think that Tim would have hit her, not ever. I really don't. I just think that, as you say, they were bad for each other, and that her staying with him when she was aware of that (because if Tyra is anything, it's self-aware) was the beginning of something that could lead to her being in a situation she otherwise wouldn't allow herself to be in (the battering part). It's a slippery slope, is what I'm getting at. *hopes that's clearer*
lol. I mean, it isn't funny, but somehow it just *is*, and LOL. The mental image alone is ftw. Glad you laughed!
Thanks so much. Really, I'm so glad that you liked it, especially because I admire your writing so much. Thanks for the lovely, juicy review, too!