Hey - I just saw a tiny typo in your lovely manifesto.
They’ve gone through such terrible pain, hurting each other in every way possible, and now is the time when they can learn about forgiveness and about how it isn’t enough just sit around and brood over past misdeeds: they have to do what they do best: adapt and carry on.
Also, this is a small thing - and possibly intentional - but have a word repeat in two sentences very close together:
Grudgingly, she agrees not to kill him--he’s harmless, after all--and once more Spike is pulled into her orbit.
Still, it’s going to be a while before love enters their story. They have to snark and grouse at each other first, before eventually they start--grudgingly--working together.
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They’ve gone through such terrible pain, hurting each other in every way possible, and now is the time when they can learn about forgiveness and about how it isn’t enough just sit around and brood over past misdeeds: they have to do what they do best: adapt and carry on.
Also, this is a small thing - and possibly intentional - but have a word repeat in two sentences very close together:
Grudgingly, she agrees not to kill him--he’s harmless, after all--and once more Spike is pulled into her orbit.
Still, it’s going to be a while before love enters their story. They have to snark and grouse at each other first, before eventually they start--grudgingly--working together.