snickfic: Buffy looking over her shoulder (Sierra painting)
snickfic ([personal profile] snickfic) wrote in [personal profile] lirazel 2009-12-06 05:53 pm (UTC)

Oooh. Very nice! The imagery in the first one is lovely all the way through. That third paragraph, especially, is just gorgeously written.

And man, Priya has enough angst to keep her busy for quite a while, doesn't she?

I notice with both of these you connect childhood events with key adult events. Did you plan that in advance, or did it just happen that way?

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